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This is a photo from my latest exhibition "Today We Choose Faces", which was held at Graphic Bar Gallery in London, UK.
model: Teona Mamrikishvili
(The older version of this photo can be seen here: yama-dharma.deviantart.com/art…
model: Teona Mamrikishvili
(The older version of this photo can be seen here: yama-dharma.deviantart.com/art…
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Make
NORITSU KOKI
Model
QSS-32_33
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Hey,
I'll start with this oen and then go on to the other 2 <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
So first ofall let's look at the composition.
While the picture is fairly well framed and there are different elements that do hint to a message in the shot, it becoems overrall inexpressive. After a first impact where the eyes notices a female figure with a pink belt buckle and a finegr pointign at t a musical instrument, it then has trouble understanding the real connection between them, and starts looking for details.
Here comes in the technical aspect; while at times having a burnt background (lack of detail on white due to overexposure) can be a technical choice, in this case it has been executed incorrectly, and therefore come out as a mistake.
Your beckground light "smears" on subject and makes you look the feelign of sharpness and contrast. For these kind of picture you need a second light source that will illuminate the subject, thus allowing you to have both a very well defined contour and contrast while having the sunject lit and distinguishable.
Hope this clarifies your concerns,
Nicola <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>